When we showed our rough copy cut 2 to our peers we got feedback on what we did well and what we need to do to improve it. We were told that the typewriter effect was good and it looked like someone was typing a story and the music playing went well with it, as it built this effect of tension as well as suspense. As well as that the positing of the titles worked quite well as it didn't get in the way of anything that was happening in the frame. What we could do to improve is to not put some of the titles so low at the bottom of the frame as well as that we need to ensure that our editing is made clear so that our story line makes sense, because if our peers weren't told the story line beforehand they may have had some difficulties to understand what it is about. As well as that we need to look at how we change the music between scenes because at certain points it just stopped and didn't run as smoothly as it should have.
Here is a link to my rough copy 2 feedback : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x1QW9cxFCew
