Thursday, 23 January 2014

Rough Copy Feedback

We showed a rough copy of our horror film to our peers we revived comments on what we did well and what we can do to improve it. What people thought went well was our good use of sound and editing which helped to build up tension. The also liked outfit the villain was wearing as it was white subverted the stereotype of someone dressed in white as pure and innocent, they commented on the saying that it was utilized well, they also liked a scence were there were loads of papers on the floor as it gave a creepy feeling of what the villain was doing. As well as that we were told we used good camera angels and shots and the creepy music was a good choice. Another thing was that we didn't cut in between shots we followed her with the camera. What would of went better would of been if we had less of a shaky cam at some points as well as getting rid of any errors such as a shadow that wasn't needed in one of the scenes.

 Here is a link to my horror film rough copy: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pNVhoacT5QY

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